Comment on Misconduct and Misdirection

1. OutriderIvyHill22 on Chapter 2 Mon 27 Nov 2023 12:02AM UTC

   

   I love your writing style. It compliments the era very well and has a sense of Austen to it. It makes the story feel like it could be an alternate ending to Pride and Prejudice itself, and allows you to give period (and thus character) accurate dialogue without awkward transitioning back and forth from a more modern diction. I also like the idea of Elizabeth being in town with the Gardiners during that time. Very nice :)

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2. 1. Rusakko on Chapter 2 Mon 27 Nov 2023 07:10PM UTC

      

      Oh, thank you! I try to pay attention to period-appropriate language, so I'm really glad to hear that it feels authentic. :)

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