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  1. Galaghiel on Chapter 3 Thu 15 Feb 2024 05:03AM UTC

    the writing on this one is excellent! tho i do have to ask, who is arthur? anyways, god i love how you described the scenes. and the last one w freddy(michael) talking to the technicians, a very polite fella. auoghhh very excited to see what happens next!

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    1. LairdeLampblack on Chapter 3 Thu 15 Feb 2024 06:20AM UTC

      so glad you enjoyed it!

      arthur is my name for the crying child here, decided to deviate from the norm. i picked arthur cause it means bear lmao

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      1. Ratfollower1983 on Chapter 3 Wed 28 Feb 2024 08:29PM UTC

        Really good name! I’ve never heard it for the crying child before.

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        1. LairdeLampblack on Chapter 3 Thu 29 Feb 2024 02:18PM UTC

          thabk you! personally didnt like evan or chris for the kid, and it also opens up opportunities for corny sibling jokes and nicknames like artie

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