Comment on Stolen Heart - Yandere! Twisted Wonderland x Reader

  1. AddictAri on Chapter 1 Sat 08 Jun 2024 04:51PM UTC

    Yes please and anything else related to the summary

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    1. HaxetyLoveRose on Chapter 1 Sat 08 Jun 2024 05:48PM UTC

      My philosophy when I wrote the summary stems with my attitude towards the entire book: Heighten the suspense. If I'm writing the chapter and then think "huh, this would be a better cliff hanger than the one I had planned," I end the chapter early. This philosophy may not work with ever genre out there, but I in terms of writing the summary I would keep it the same. You want to find the balance between telling your reader what the book is about and telling them absolutely nothing. We can all to a certain degree figure out how the story ends (at least really in any story with a satisfying ending): the boy gets the girl, the hero bears the villain, the girl steals the object. What we don't know is how the protagonist will get there.

      Does that make any sense?

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      1. AddictAri on Chapter 1 Sun 09 Jun 2024 02:01AM UTC

        Yes, although my problem lies in how to heighten the suspence and how to find that middle ground.

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