Comment on Natural Altruism

  1. ElrodAlbino on Chapter 1 Wed 09 Oct 2024 06:46PM UTC

    I really like the story so far, and think the concept is well done, but why is Sophia in Winslow? In canon, she made it part of her contract that she'd stay in Winslow with Emma. The PRT wasn't keen on it, but having a lawyer on your side helps.

    Here, she hates Winslow, hates Emma, and doesn't have a lawyer. I understand the story needs it, but why is she there?

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    1. Prelatis_Shitpost on Chapter 1 Wed 09 Oct 2024 06:55PM UTC

      Good question.

      Obviously the story needs her in Winslow to grow her relationship with Taylor but my reasoning for her staying in Winslow is mostly because of her new motivations. First of all, Sophia had a much less spotty track record before being forced in the Wards and had an easier time getting some concessions as she is far more motivated about helping people than hurting criminals. Second of all, she has plenty of motivation to stay in Winslow because even if she hates it she sees it as something she has to do, without her Winslow would be lawless and she's one of the people keeping the weak there from suffering the most.

      I hope this made sense.

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      1. ElrodAlbino on Chapter 1 Thu 10 Oct 2024 02:36AM UTC

        It's a workable reason, and that's really all you need. I look forward to where you take this story.

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      2. TechBlade9000 on Chapter 1 Sat 19 Oct 2024 10:49AM UTC

        It makes enough sense for dumb teen logic

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