Your characterisation of Billy has been wonderfully done and I feel I understand him more through this work. I feel a lot of sympathy for him. The push and pull between Billy and Joss is constantly keeping me on my toes as one push too far could mean an explostion. Please keep going, I'm shocked this hasn't got more eyes on it ;-)
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