I've really been wanting to comment on this chapter in particular because I found it impressive how on point you wrote Shiori's snark in it. And somehow you seem to be getting better at capturing her responses with every chapter.
I love how you depict shioraven doing normal things and having casual conversations. Little chats and day-to-day activities are where I, personally, feel romance in a relationship the most. So this fic has been very enjoyable for me in that regard. I've also come to look forward to seeing updates every week. Thanks for writing.
I'm happy to hear you say that!! I always put a lot of thought into their conversations, cause I make sure it both flows well and sounds natural while sounding like an actual conversation they had. Shiori's snark is honestly one of my favorite things to write, so knowing I'm getting better at it makes me feel more confident.
Thank YOU for reading!! I'm glad you're enjoying the fic (づ๑•ᴗ•๑)づ♡
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