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  1. shk_SN7326 Tue 31 Dec 2024 04:39PM UTC

    This is so good! I feel like it was somewhat hidden because it was hard to see it in the TL.

    I love interactions among the Straw Hats. Robin as per usual is perfect, she simply gets everybody in that crew like a mother would. She is everyone's confidant. I also appreciate Franky's interaction, it was pretty nice.

    As for the SaNami, it was fantastic! Slow burn, kind of angsty at times, but so, SO good. Sanji fell first (literally since he heard her laugh), but Nami fell harder (not really hehe since Sanji is down bad for Nami). You showed Nami's struggles after that awful experience, and Sanji's lack of self esteem, his feelings of unworthiness, perfectly. I know Sanji is depicted in the Manga as THE nice person who is there to feed everybody. And don't get me wrong, he is incredibly nice (especially to women), but I feel like Nami's niceness is sometimes under looked due to her usual hard exterior. Yet you showcased here so well! She cares for her crew and loves them so much. Here she tries to help Sanji, she wants him to feel better too.

    This was near perfect, so thank you! That kiss at the end was needed ^^
    I do hope as well that you write them again in the future :)

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    1. FangirlismForLife Thu 02 Jan 2025 04:17PM UTC

      Yeah, I feel like when i struggled to write her, i realized when i thought deeper abt how she is that shes rlly compassionate!

      Thanks sm i probs will write them in the future! 🩷🩷🩷

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