Ikkkk, I love the potentials for their dynamic in the army way too much to not be weak for fics that include it, so seriously? Awesome job.
I think my favorite might have been the tent kiss, not just bcs it was the first kiss and all, but more because you did a really good job of hitting the deeper implications of their relationship and their personal situations without outright saying it. You do that throughout the fic but that's my favorite instance of it because it felt really,,,,, like,,,,,, human? Like Mulan freaked out cuz Shang almost found out and Shang was just horrified with himself in a way that really hit that purposeful miscommunication between them on the head.
Honestly, I could keep going for a while about what parts I loved and why but I don't think I'd be able to properly put it into words so just, again, thank you for writing this, I've been desperate for a new Mulan fic that focused on the Ping aspect of her and this was just absolutely perfect ❤❤❤
omg this is the nicest comment anyone's ever left on one of my fics. I pretty much thought I would be writing it for just me - I rewatched the movie and spent the next week hyperfixating on it when I should have been doing literally anything else because I've been thinking about the concept since I was a kid. I'm soooo glad it resonated with you.
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