Heeey greaaat work! I really enjoyed reading this fic. But just one thing : as a Belgian, I found some faults for the french parts, I hope it wasn't from Google Translate? Thanks for spending time writing this. (Sorry for my English if there is any fault)
Don't worry the fic itself was good enough to recover the faults xD There is the correction : • “Oui, je suis là. Madeleine, je suis désolé, s’il vous plaît continuer,” -> it's "continuez", we have to conjugate the verb. • "Oh, oui. Eh bien, je vais préparer le cercle d’invocation moi-même ; C’est le— ah —la plupart de temps. Si elle est prête à l’heure de votre arrivée, le convoquant le réel n’est qu’une minute ou deux.” -> this sentence doens't make sense but I don't really understand what you wanted to say so I can't suggest a correction. • "Ah...something vient de tomber sur mes genoux qui requiert mon attention immédiate. J’irai contact demain et nous pouvons fixer un rendez-vous. Mes plus sincères excuses. Passez une bonne journée, Madame.” -> -you forget to translate the "something", it's "quelque chose" in french -it's "mon attention immédiat" without the "e" at the end -it's "je vous contacterai demain" instead of "j'irai contact demain". Voilà !
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