Comment on coming undone (one step at a time)

  1. leaf_o4 on Chapter 1 Wed 29 Jan 2025 03:32PM UTC

    I need to install a floating comment box extension so badly.

    this is like. nightmarish. one of the most horrifying things I've ever read. I cannot imagine how freaked out his brothers are. you've got this slow spiral thing going on that makes the progression feel so natural even though nothing about this is natural. Leo saying that they don't want Donnie to overwork and Donnie hearing "actually you have no value" is crime against me specifically. I love that Leo keeps hitting back (not physically)--like, yes, he is so desperately terrified for his twin and wanting to help however he can, but he's a yeller. he's going to yell.

    (We don’t want you to, Leo had said. We don’t want you.) Donnie, my guy, my beautiful purple boy, beloved softshell: that is not what he said and that is NOT what he meant. stop projecting

    combining this curse with the CC curse creates like. the ultimate Donnie Has A Bad Time curse. he'd be dead in a week methinks

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