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  1. Drokain_priest on Chapter 4 Wed 05 Feb 2025 06:35PM UTC

    Two things, if I may.

    According to my research, the evil fairy's name is actually Belvera, not Belivera.

    And as this is a fanfic, it would not be impossible, unlikely, or bad if you did say that Serezawa and Vivian survived if you wanted to. I certainly enjoyed their additions to 5he movies.

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    1. Siren_DarkOcean on Chapter 4 Thu 06 Feb 2025 08:15AM UTC

      Yeah, I developed a bad habit of spelling her name like that when I realized and by then it was burned into my brain of the miss spelling
      I'm trying to work on it trust me

      And this is from me I prefer to write on my phone especially with cross posting fics from Wattpad, it's more easier for me because I've been doing this since like ninth or tenth grade aka fourteen or fifteen and I've been more comfortable writing fics on my phone than a laptop, means I can work on a draft in public too when I need to pass the time and do something I think is important

      On the topic of Vivian and Serizawa, I am going to keep them dead both to keep to the canon of Monsterverse even with what tweaks I have planned plus it feels a bit wrong bringing them back. I'm mainly upset they did Vivian's death dirty in like, it was so sudden and there was barely meantion post that in film wise other than her files up on a monitor during Emma's speech, though the Novelization brought a bit of a scene for it with Serizawa in her old room in Castle Bravo before going to Godzilla's temple. Plus alongside that, I have no idea how they would've survived their deaths, Vivian being crushed then her corpse eaten by Ghidorah while Serizawa suffering radiation exposure to sacrifice himself to heal Godzilla in the temple both feel impossible to survive from and kind of making the deaths a bit worthless to bring them back.
      I do plan to keep one character who had a canon death later (glancing at Syllca) alive and have to tweak it for it so I don't want to go overboard of it

      But thank you for the feedback and I'm hoping you enjoy the fic!

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      1. Drokain_priest on Chapter 4 Thu 06 Feb 2025 01:56PM UTC

        I see. Good for you.

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