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  1. You used this prompt BEAUTIFULLY! I laughed through the whole beginning scene, your humour is top tier. Hermione is a perfect little tease and OMG was it hot!! Mid-sex Apparition was a new one for me and I am here for it.

    Nott lost his shoes somewhere between the second and fifth hand (his inhibitions around 1995)

    😂😂

    “You’re all being ridiculous,” she says.
    “Emphasis on the dicks,” mumbles Potter.

    The way I cackled at this was embarrassing.

    I loved this line:

    She has that allure about her lately, like a siren and her sailors.

    I loved how you came full circle at the end with Hermione crossing off ‘no pining’ from her New Year list.

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    1. Oh thank you so much!! I'm so glad you enjoyed the silly humour 🤭 Hermione really was the biggest tease in this fic, but she's a girl that knows what she wants (to strike something off her list!!)

      Thank you so much for reading, and I appreciate your lovely comment!!

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