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  1. Blair_Branwen on Chapter 1 Sun 23 Feb 2025 02:49AM UTC

    Jane's pretty lucky that whoever killed this would-be rapist was here to "save" here. Must had been Nick who seems rather interested in her. Speaking of, I love the sheer carnage in the opening scene. It was quick and optimal with the gunshots and stopping of the wagon. These bandits know how to do their stuff and it shows.

    I wonder how they gonna random her for, and if they will be able to assuming someone else try to have their 'fun' with her. But I doubt that if Nick's around.

    I like this start, I can tell you're gonna cook with this one!

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    1. Babblecat3000 on Chapter 1 Sun 23 Feb 2025 05:31AM UTC

      Pretty pink tiger

      😊🌟Thank you!🌟😊

      Yup, she is lucky there is at least one die-hard professional in the gang...or at least he's behaving that way towards Jane 😅

      Thanks, there's a lot of carnage in this one. The only other fic this dark is the Friday the 13th duology.

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