Comment on The 5th of September

  1. Octavian_Grey on Chapter 11 Thu 13 Mar 2025 09:10PM UTC

    THE SACRED BEAUTY OF THE FISHING MINI GAME!!!!! That old man talk was funny!!! And I really loved that singalong part, it was sweet.

    But then you went and really got me in the feels, their bonding is so good!!!!! It suits the mood of a fishing trip so well too! Revealing secrets and tragedies and wishing they could hold each others hand but not doing so~~~~~~

    I like Anna’s name - that last name was an excellent choice.

    Thanks for updating!

    Last Edited Thu 13 Mar 2025 09:11PM UTC

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    1. Small_Bean_Bag on Chapter 11 Fri 21 Mar 2025 06:39PM UTC

      Thank you <3
      I'm happy, I went back and turned it up a little with the fishing and bonding. That's one of the things I like to do, explore the characters.
      Also I'm really torturing myself with how slow their relationship must go. But it's hard to go from "ready to kill each other" to "I guess you're fine" and that's why I like it ^^.

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