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  1. Vixx2pointOh on Chapter 1 Sat 15 Mar 2025 10:38AM UTC

    Aaahhhh I love it!!! You have captured them so well. Please. I need more. I am greedy, I know, but as I've said... I'm not above begging!!

    His heart unfolded like an endless scroll of passion, confessions and insecurity: parts of him he perhaps would never share in the end. HE NEEDS A HUG 😭😭😭(also extra kudos for this beautiful tapestry of words!)

    She felt like tumbling into that blue ocean, fishing for a hint that gave answer to her bewilderment.     MY WIFE NEEDS A HUG TOO. Once again 🥰😘😍 I am eating this up!

     

    WHAT. THE. ACTUAL... FECK
    What is this end? Is this some evil trick. How DARE you. I demand more (politely because I do have some manners). But really.. I know that I pull shit like this (my last Fandom had a fun nickname for me) but I don't approve of being on the receiving end... what crack... WHAT CRACK. Why does he yell her name?.WHYYYYY

    Okay.
    I'm fine.
    I'm fiiiiiiiine.

    More please.
    Side note: are you British? Your Jane seems so British to me (Not a bad thing at all).

    Xx

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    1. whatfreak on Chapter 1 Sat 15 Mar 2025 09:18PM UTC

      Haha thank you so much, I'm really happy to know you like it XD And that I actually hit the mark somewhere lol, I really didn't expect to.

      You're free to beg at anytime, I like people on their knees;)

      THANK YOUUU, I'm proud. They both need a few hugs tbh, preferably from each other.

      Yeeeesh... I dare, quite often too, so get used to it lol (thank you for the manners). I need to know that nickname btw, so I can complain on yours whenever you pull this shit haha. The crack? We'll see.

      You're fine;)

      And no, I'm not British haha - Danish. Although thank you kindly for thinking I am! I'm not intending Jane to be entirely British, but I've always thought that he carries himself somewhere up there at times, with his lingo or style that makes him a little high-arsed (*cough British*). Specifically with some phrases maybe. It suits his stupid confidence;)

      I can't wait to see how you'll react for the next one;)))

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