I enjoyed reading this story! The writing style is a bit broken for my taste, but if you translated from russian I guess style can be overlooked. And of course style is a personal thing.
As to the story content, I loved Severus' character, the mixture of passionate intensity with insecure vulnerability, of harshness with tenderness. Harry too, terribly insecure and with good reason, but also bold like the Gryffindor that he is.
I didn't much like the Daisy part of the story, but since she convinced Severus to stop running I forgive her OC existence.
Oh, and a question... What's the relevance of the mystery tale the kids share at the start of the epilogue? I gather that third floor flat is where Harry and Snape end up living together, but are they connected somehow to the previous story? Did they know the original witch? I don't like being left without understanding a story fully, but still I must congratulate you for the mystery you manage to create.
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Miva4 on Chapter 6 Wed 19 Mar 2025 09:34AM UTC
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