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  1. crushedmary Mon 31 Mar 2025 02:48PM UTC

    I'm so glad you're writing more of them! I'm picky with my first person fics, since I find a lot of them could easily have changed the pronouns and be written in third instead, but you got first person pov down beautifully! I always tell people in order to pull it off you really need to be in tune with the character and their thought process, and I could really see Lloyd in your narration here. This fic was so sweet and such a treat to end my day. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us ❤️

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    1. anotherFrenchGirl Mon 31 Mar 2025 08:08PM UTC

      Thank you so much ! Yeah I think I wouldn't dare to try a first person writting with Zelos, he's much difficult for me to wrap my head around his personna. Lloyd seemed easier, I'm really glad you enjoyed! Oh boy, too many sf AU for some reason, haha XD

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