Comment on A Tentative Ellipsis (the parting of your lips and the ache in your eyes)

  1. Account Deleted on Chapter 1 Mon 07 Apr 2025 02:32AM UTC

    So…I am finally reading this and holy fuck I have been missing out. So far I have only read the prologue, but FUCK. You have such a beautiful way with words and it makes me feel like I am watching a movie and am able to picture every single detail. It’s mesmerizing.

    “So pliant, so willing… You’re just the perfect little pet, aren’t you?” — oh I just know Rio was losing her shit and her stomach was doing somersaults

    “Rio crooked a brow at Agatha, scoffing slightly. “Are you trying to make a statement, weirdo?”

    Agatha rolled her eyes and pinched Rio’s side. “No, you asshole. I just don’t care for white sugar.” — Lmaoo they are already an old married couple, buncha sillies hehe

    RIO SINGING LANDSLIDE WE WONN!!!

    Okok these are not very coherent thoughts but alas, I am loving it so far. You have such a beautiful way with words and capture these two so well in this little universe of yours. I can’t wait to read the rest of it!!

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