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  1. AShipperWithIssues on Chapter 5 Tue 22 Apr 2025 07:15PM UTC

    I don’t think you rushed it at all!! It actually went down pretty fell!!
    In the heat of the moments like that when urgency is importantly, it’s suppose to feel rushed and crazy, and that’s exactly how it came off!! I think you wrote it perfectly!! I felt the urgency of the moment, the way you wrote it was fantastic! So no need to rewrite it!! It’s great the way it is!! X3

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    1. ZetaBerry02 on Chapter 5 Tue 22 Apr 2025 10:21PM UTC

      Lemme tell you when I say I had breathe of relief reading this comment. I don't really have anyone to review my chapters so I go based off how I felt in the moment of writing. This makes me so happy that it came off the way I intended, Thank you so much for reading! Already working on Chapter 6!

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      1. AShipperWithIssues on Chapter 5 Wed 23 Apr 2025 06:17AM UTC

        And thank you for writing it!!! And yep, no need to worry, you’re doing great!!!! X3

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