Comment on The Town Bicycle

  1. Sorry for the misunderstanding! I didn't want you to base it on her story, I just really like the relaxing atmosphere she presents. What I wanted to see is that "Feeling", and currently, few authors can depict this pure emotion unique to this couple as naturally as Keo.
    In fact, I think I may just want to see a story where the characters' personality is relatively faithful to the original work(DBS)? They are both quite frank people, and Hit can't hide his special love for Goku at all, since he can't even control the corners of his mouth when facing Goku, LOL.I may think about the development of NSFW first, but SFW interaction is also very good. I am happy to see everything about this couple. If I have to say something specific, I hope there can be some more gentle and soft physical contact between them, such as holding hands or hugging. Considering that they spent most of their time fighting in the original work(DBS)XD
    Please don't worry too much about my safety issues! I have been wanting to register this account for a long time, and this is just an opportunity to make up my mind. Whether now or in the future, I will do this one day. There are always some things worth taking risks in the world, aren't there?

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    1. You're very right, there are things worth taking risks over. And freedom of expression is certainly one of those things! I just wanted to make sure you didn't feel pressured to make an account just to read/comment on my fics.

      Thank you so much for clarifying. I can 100% work with your ideas. I love the Hit/Goku pairing and I love the idea of their relationship being tender and gentle. I had another reader request a Hit/Goku story a few weeks ago. I am working on that request, but I think I can use your ideas in that chapter. I will also write another chapter just for you. The world needs MUCH more Hit/Goku and I'm going to deliver it!

      Thank you again!

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      1. Yeah the world needs A LOT Hit/Goku 😭😭😭 It seems like this is the most likely official pairing of Hit ,LOL
        Their relationship seems passionate, but also reveals a subtle tenderness... very intriguing. In the original animation,their time together was still too little to develop more delicate things. However, this is the world of fan fiction authors! I’m looking forward to more wonderful stories☺️

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        1. The moment in Super that made me ship Hit and Goku was after they fought the second time, both of them were just chilling down by the water. And Hit has this little smile and Goku is grinning. They just looked adorable. I think they work very well together, with their personalities being so different, but they both love fighting. Especially fighting each other.

          And thank you for your other comment! I believe I'm the only person to ever write Hit/Tien and Hit/Toppo. I know of one other fic that has Hit/Frieza/Frost and one that brings Yamcha in too so it's all four of them. I don't think I'm industrious enough to wrangle four characters having sex, so more power to them!

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