MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! MY FRIEND! WHAAAAAAAAAAT????? I was dead tired and trying to get myself out of bed this morning, when I saw your notification for a new chapter on this, and I told myself: "you know what? my life sucks enough right now, I deserve a good thing" and I read this chapter while having breakfast, with the idea of commenting once I reached the office (fun fact - I texted that I would get in late, because I was reading it) and since my boss is out of office, I plan on continuing reading it throughout the day - and probably commenting on it.
First of all: BODYGUARD AU??? HOW DARE YOU pick my favorite trope EVER??? Are you trying to murder me? I'm going to enjoy this so much! Already this first chapter is perfect! I hate that nobody in Joke's family recognizes the poor boy's dyslexia. Not even himself - I just want to hug him so tightly and pat his head and tell him everything will be alright that he's not dumb or stupid he just needs to do things differently. *makes grubby hands at Joke*
These two lines tugget at my heart: Joke wanted that look off his face immediately; it didn’t suit him. On a different night, at a different bar, Joke could get lost in eyes like that. I love an immediately whipped ML <3 and honestly, knowing Jack, I can definitely understand Joke, but the same is valid for the opposite direction, who wouldn't be immediately whipped by knowing Joke? ARGH, I can't wait to read more, but I need to finish this comment! *breathes into a brown paper bag to calm herself*
The immediate flirting! The new job! Gawwhhhhh <3
No but seriously, how are you so good? You're like the second author that I come across here (incidentally both of you in the BL territory) that's so good that makes me fangirl like a 15yo at an Idol concert. (beware, I sneaked my way into the DMs of the first one and made really good friends with them, I might be coming for you too! :P ) I wish I was that good at writing too! Fun fact N2 I also have a very old Bodyguard AU WIP for one of my favorite TVshow that will probably never see the light of day XD that's how much I love this trope! I cannot wait to continue this, so that's exactly what I'm going to do right now! <3 TTYL!
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