Comment on Motorcycle Emptiness

  1. SungieSpades on Chapter 1 Mon 14 Jul 2025 05:25AM UTC

    OKAY I WAS GONNA START THIS OFF NICELY BUT WHAT THE FUCK ?? WHEN I TELL YOU THAT I PHYSICALLY JUMPED UP IN MY BED WHEN I SAW THE BLOCKED MESSAGE I AM NOT LYING WHAT THE HELL THIS IS WAS SO CUTE AND I WAS SO IN IT AND THEN THAT?? HUH???? I MEAN YEAH I READ THE TAGS AND I KNEW IT WAS GONNA BE *SOMETHING* BUT DAMN THIS IS CHAPTER ONE AND WHAT A FUCKING HOOK

    ANYWAY

    THIS WAS SO GOODDDDD AHHHHHHH I LOVED EVERY SECOND OF OT IT WAS HOT AND SEXY AND CUTE AND FUNNY AND ONE OF THE BEST THINGS IVE EVER READ

    the first thing that made me giggle was the safe word convo because minhos safe word being egg yolk and jising being squash was just so stupid and I loved it lmao
    And the motorcycle ride was SO CUTE like genuinely I wanna get "everything leaves a mark" as a tattoo to remember this and also just because it resonated so hard with me like I had to take a minute because it was so cute but so sad in a way and AHH God I just can't believe this is a read fic I'm reading this is amazing and I really hope it only gets better from here because I need to read more and more and learn everything about them. I'm sososososo excited to read chapter 2 and the rest of this I'm so hooked on this I love this fic and you and please I need to just break into your laptop rn and read everything you've ever written

    Last Edited Mon 14 Jul 2025 05:28AM UTC

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    1. Mr_Terrorman on Chapter 1 Wed 16 Jul 2025 09:18AM UTC

      YAYAYAY YOU LIKED IT! I honestly didn’t think that the blocking was THAT much of a hook but i’m very glad that it is, only adds more character to the story :) !

      Safe words are sooo under-used in my opinion. Everyone always settles on the traffic light system which is very easy, but i feel like it misses the opportunity of a fun safe word placement too.
      Love writing more serious moments like “everything leaves a mark” haha. yes it’s a real fic and i promise it will only get better !!!

      thank you so much for commenting and i hope to meet you again in chapter two comments <3

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