I actually got terrified for a bit when reading these chapters, 100/10. If my characters were dealing with this, Mia (the main one), would be screaming if she saw clowns, snakes, her mother, or the ones she loved abdonding her, that and probably everything else in this prank. She can be jumped scared easily in the dark, but her guard is usually always up. For her, and her brother and cousins, since they have Elemental Powers, the prankers would have to get magic cuffs to block their Elemental Powers so they can't fight back. I'm pretty sure Mia would be freaking out that all the children were missing, and start panicking, and then her best friend, and horror-buff friend Kaylee is trying to help calm her down, while also explaining all the horror movies going on, then enter Pennywise, or some horror clown, and Mia would just start screaming and running off in fear. If she didn't know it was a prank, she'd hold a grudge for a very, very long time.
Also amazing chapter, you really got me scared, I recognized all the horror movies going on, and for a moment thought a ghost was actually hunting the temple. Also, I'm posting my own stories right now, and I'm thinking of doing something similar after the prequel book that follows the main characters between their own war and their life at school. It will follow Mia and her family as she readjust to being Queen, and I'll probably also do a holiday version as well, but you've inspired me, you're a amazing writer.
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