Ugh,stop, this was such a rollercoaster of a chapter,why would you do this to me? The chapter was so hype, sad, and just overall great- I think it might be better than the first half but I only might think that because of it was leading up to this and this has more stuff to it yk? Love the opening with sword fighting, always a banger whenever swords are ever involved in a story. I can't get over the drunk Arthur scene nor the scene with the twins when lance was getting his trial like it was filled with such great emotions and the scene with Arthur was just so sweet. I am too reading this at hours no one should be awake for but I had to say something for this chapter and I do take it back, it was a good idea to break these episodes. Also, everytime I go to Tumblr and look at your posts, I am always like "THE TWIN LADY" because I love these two idiots very very much Anyway, Take care <3 Bye (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
I would like to formally apologize for doing this to you (but I can't promise it'll get better, like ever). And thank you so much! I totally agree, I liked the second part better as well, but for the same reason you explained - the build-up from part one finally pays off. Haha yes, sword fighting is amazing, but I will need to step up my game writing fight scenes (bc I am horrible at it, so please, have patience with me). Omg, thanks! I do have to admit that I love writing drunk people, so I'm happy you enjoyed it! Also very relieved that all the emotions came across as they were supposed to!! Haha I hope you got some sleep, but I'm very happy you commented even with the late hour inconveniencing you! Thank you so, so much for all your feedback, like your comments mean so much to me!! OMG YOU FOLLOW MY TUMBLR!! AND YOU REFER TO ME AS THE TWIN LADY HAHA! ILY, YOU SEEM AMAZING. Also omg thank you, thank you.
That was one of the sweetest replies I have ever gotten on a comment- I would comment on every single one of your chapters ever-😭😭 You can't see me but I am crying- god- that was so sweet, you are so sweet and no need to apologize, it's fine, great even, I love angst. YOU SEEM AMAZING TOO, YOU ARE AMAZING, AND I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WRITING SO MUCH. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
NO PLEASE, NOW WE'RE BOTH CRYING!! Also, I am very, very happy you commented, but please don't feel obligated to do it! :)) AND YOU ARE SO SWEET AND NICE ILY.
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