Comment on Riley's (not so) normal days

  1. SrSusanito on Chapter 3 Sat 09 Aug 2025 05:56PM UTC

    Your portrayal of Alice was... at the very least, curious. I didn't expect it to be so easy for Riley to approach her and not be brutally torn apart by the demon.

    But don't be mistaken, I have no problem with Alice behaving less hostilely. That actually makes her less predictable than usual. And I suppose Oliver's presence also played a role in putting her at ease.

    Changing the subject: Riley's group dynamic seems nice to me so far. Although I suppose that later on you will go a little deeper into the relationship between our fic fan and her friends. It would be really fun to see more interactions between them.

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    1. FelinaXD on Chapter 3 Sun 10 Aug 2025 02:53AM UTC

      The truth is, I was a little worried about that part, since it felt like something outside of Alice's character, but due to the nature of this story, I felt it was the right thing to do.

      And yes, in the next chapters, I'll try to delve deeper into Riri's relationships with her friends, not only with them but also with her mother and other characters! I'm really excited about this story!

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      1. SrSusanito on Chapter 3 Sun 10 Aug 2025 06:21PM UTC

        😊

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