Oh gods this was amazing! Immediately subscribing to this series to see whatever happens next, and now-
Everything was easy to understand and easy on the eye thanks to the comfortable way you formatted it, I really enjoy the fact you don't make Jason despise B like so many others do because while it fits with Canon (from what I remember) I love anything that has Jason and B being in a somewhat healthy relationship (somewhat because Bruce can't hold a healthy relationship to save his life when someone he loves is involved)
Also enjoyed that you had Dick be the one to cause the whole mess- under the influence of a spell but still- because people always make him as the peace bringer of the house of some sorts that parents everyone and has a perfect relationship with B, which I have no complaints with and quite enjoy normally but it's fun to see that change a bit
I hope you keep alfred involved in the story when you can because most people think of him as only a butler but he's practically been the only parental figure Bruce has had since his parents died and it's kind of sad to me when people just keep him as just a skilled butler (though of course, I'm here for whatever choice you make with it as I'm not here solely for alfred&Bruce time)
I can't wait to see how the league gets roped into this! Which reminds me- I see this changed alot between different fics, so if you could answer a few questions that'd be awesome:
1. Do the league know batman's identity? 2. Do the league know about the batfamily? (If yes, what level of know of them are they?) 3. Is batman a founding member? 4. How long has it been since the league was formed?
That's all for now! I really enjoyed this chapter lol so thank you for creating it
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Tra_muah on Chapter 1 Sun 17 Aug 2025 11:22PM UTC
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