Comment on When Stars Don’t Look Right

  1. solarsthoughts on Chapter 2 Thu 21 Aug 2025 04:56AM UTC

    Yay new update!!

    This was something new and I really loved it!! I think you NAILED the format and writing of the logs xx It was fast paced and kept my anxiety up (in a good way) as I was waiting to see what happened next. You really did a great job keeping me HOOKED

    And the emotional side of things… Stars, it hit me harder than I thought it would 😔 Even with a log format and a different pov, I still feel so connected to Spensa and feel so much for Skyward flight.

    Anyway, this was honestly so so good and I can’t wait to see what else you have planned 🤍

    (Sorry if this comment was written a bit weird, I’m so burnt out I don’t even know how English works anymore)

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    1. The_StarBorn on Chapter 2 Thu 21 Aug 2025 11:26AM UTC

      !!!
      Glad I was able to keep you hooked with something simple and I’m happy you liked the format!!!

      The emotional part of this was not something i expected to be so prominent in this chapter but I’m glad it was

      Don’t worry the comment wasn’t weird I get it😭

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