You got Nona! You got Nona down so perfectly - this feels so much like the book itself, which I really admire because Muir has such a... specific voice. And you made it so... real! Nona WOULD sometimes just be not quite six months old & not quite nineteen, & it's absolutely wonderful.
It was almost too wonderful—Nona couldn't stop squirming, rubbing her thighs together, her eighteen-year-old body coursing with feelings that overwhelmed her tiny baby self. - It feels so... very her. Both the way she is both the Earth & herself, & the way she IS a body full of big feelings... this is gonna sound so ridiculous, but in its own way Nona as an age player feels like a microcosm of the weirdness of her whole life because... well, she IS both a human teenagers & the spirit of the Earth itself.
She ran a steady palm up and down Nona's back, her body still and calm except for the hard nipples poking against Nona. - Absolutely delicious image, & also so very Cam on so many different levels.
Nona could tell that Mummy had held real babies before. - That is both hot as hell & also really sad? I love the way that Nona just makes all these... connections, & isn't necessarily ashamed of it/shying away from it even though I feel like a lot of people would, since... well, there's a taboo to making those kinds of connections. But Nona doesn't have that!
Mummy had the best cock, and not just because it was the only one Nona had ever seen. - I love Nona so much, & especially your Nona. Absolutely delightful.
"I love being a baby," Nona said, nuzzling closer to Mummy's hairy stomach. "Especially when I get to swallow your cock, or lick Mama's cunt, or play with Mommy's cardboard cities. And especially especially when I get to suck on yours or Mama's tits. Or Mommy's, but I guess his tits are really Mama's." - This is so cute. I love Nona's priorities.
Urgh, this is just so... it feels so tender & so true to canon in a way that I didn't think was entirely possible. Nona is just so LOVED, in all the myriad ways, & you showed it so perfectly...
Thank you. Thank you thank you thank you for such an absolutely delightful fic!
I'm so glad you liked it, and very flattered to be compared to Muir's prose! I thought Nona and her family had great infantilization vibes, and all three co-parents were enjoying playing mommy in canon. I try to write age play whenever it's on the Battleship board, and I finally had an F/F ship I could write for you :)
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