This was such a powerful continuation of Day of Death. I could feel Tim’s tension in every line, the way he couldn’t sit still until he saw Lucy again. The little details you added — the hours passing, Jackson and Angela being there, even Rachel — made it all so vivid. And that ending with the video? Absolutely perfect, it broke me.
Well, the breaking had to happen before the healing begins. I didn't re-hash the canon scenes on purpose, but tried to work on what wasn't said, so that I can set up the scene for after. Time might move faster as the story progresses, but this had to be dragged out like this.
I'm offering you some healing tape soon, but thank you for the amazing comment! <3
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