Comment on His head was twisted, Her heart divided

  1. Shasta lake (Guest) on Chapter 3 Tue 02 Sep 2025 08:58AM UTC

    One writing mistake you made was mira going back to America zoey is the one from America burbank California also i don't believe a word Celine said about them leaving they might be hurt about rumi lying to them for years but they would never abandon her after finding out Celine sold her into slavery they would be horrified enraged and disgusted at what she did to there sister knowing mira I bet she punched her and gulit if they had not pointed there weapons at her and made her run away to Celine she would still be with them safe and sound with them they did not leave her to her fate they are out there looking for her trying to find out where the demons are keeping her prisoner and rescue her ps: i really hate this jinu and I'm hoping rumi gets some payback in the end and kills him and gwima

    Comment Actions

    1. BeautifulSymphony89 on Chapter 3 Tue 02 Sep 2025 02:18PM UTC

      Ah I knew i mixed it up. Ill try to edit that. I was a bit sick writing this, still am so my apologies. Dont fret over their reactions. I promise this wont be the last time you hear about them. My brain knows about the ending I want and certain details for Jinu and Rumi. Im still piecing it all. But I will say, just as I had warned, this is a dark story. Rumis mental state is gonna get pushed to her limit. Juju had gotten his past memories erased yet there's still something thats giving him an emotional connection to rumi he doesn't understand. He didn't forget her but his feelings should have died. Instead something new is forming that hes gonna keep shrugging off and Rumi is going through hell to notice anything let alone think straight. There will be some fluff, there may be some reawakening moments, we'll see. But I'll make those corrections! If I feel better ill start the next chapter I finished the outline yesterday. Thank you for your words though!

      Comment Actions