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1. superat626 on Chapter 3 Mon 08 Sep 2025 11:08AM UTC

   

   "Every few feet, he tilted his head, his gaze catching on some new detail: posters peeling from brick walls, a couple bickering at a bus stop, a kid in a dino hoodie dragging their mum toward the school gates. He wasn’t just observing, he was absorbing, cataloguing every mundane moment with the precision of a collector. He moved like a tourist, eyes sweeping each crack and corner, as if trying to memorize the city’s very soul." - I really liked that?

   I really like that went in the museum trip it is very good, but i don't have the braincells to say why that felt really good to read. A great choice.

   OOF. Buddy. ouch. The gemstone exhibit.

   This is very good, I'm delighting in this tension from leaving the cafe.

   Yessss. Amazing. What an excellent chapter.

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2. 1. idol_eyes on Chapter 3 Tue 09 Sep 2025 02:02PM UTC

      

      Glad that bit stuck out to you! Corinthian's curiosity for the waking world and human life is fun to describe. :D

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