This was an absolutely stunning chapter. The emotional depth you managed to capture in a single scene is incredible. The quiet, grounded intimacy between Lucy and Tim is palpable—from the unspoken taco swap to the earth-shattering confession of "I knew you would find me." You have a gift for "show, don't tell"; every small gesture, from Tim's thumb rubbing her palm to his body losing tension in her presence, speaks volumes more than any grand declaration ever could.
The balance between Lucy's vulnerability and her wry humor felt so authentic, and Tim's cautious yet unwavering support is perfectly in character. Their dynamic is beautifully written, a masterclass in subtlety and unspoken understanding. The ending, with their "sneaky pact," is the perfect, heartwarming culmination that feels true to who they are. Thank you for sharing such a magnificent piece of writing
You are going to make me blush. Or cry. Or both. Thank you for the beautiful words. They have so many unspoken and unnamed feelings, covered by so many other external things, and it'll take them a bit to sort through whatever they're feeling.
Again, thank you so much for the kindest words! <3
It means so much that you felt it that way. If my words managed to cut through even a little of what’s weighing on your own feelings, then I’m already grateful. Thank you for receiving them so sincerely <3
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