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  1. Randomguy_Niceguy on Chapter 4 Sat 20 Sep 2025 12:58AM UTC

    I was broken, I was to be frozen,
    It hurt to inhale, I made myself impale,
    My vision was leaving me, and I thought death it would be,
    Then I got my sight, I awoke to see a site,
    A wendigo, Oh how fast my blood went a-go,
    Now in the morning I stay in a cave, She's too strong I have to behave,
    Like a prince stuck in a castle, Do I love or think this is a hassle?,
    I can't choose, stuck between love or noose,
    She hugs and warms me, yet she won't leave me be!

    P.S. Basic summarization of this story without much plot.

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    1. Why2001 on Chapter 4 Sat 20 Sep 2025 02:05AM UTC

      Thank you... Idk if that last part is a compliment or a gripe lol.

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      1. Randomguy_Niceguy on Chapter 4 Sat 20 Sep 2025 06:21AM UTC

        Indeed a man like you deserves praise, you start with a blank story and make it raise,

        I'm a stop rhyming real quick, gonna be honest this story is actually peak bro, it's different from the ones that have a main just *hole and stick* a wendigo or the *non consensual hole and stick* one shots I have found. if I could, I would tip the chef three times what he makes on a daily basis, because he definitely cooked.

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        1. Why2001 on Chapter 4 Sat 20 Sep 2025 06:59AM UTC

          Oh I appreciate that because I know it doesn't have much going on. The setting as isolated and its just 2 characters with minimal to zero dialogue. But i was going for the slow descent into "madness" or succumbing to evil trope with a twist i guess lol.

          But thank you again, im glad you like it so far.

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          1. Randomguy_Niceguy on Chapter 4 Sat 20 Sep 2025 07:26AM UTC

            "A man who enjoys will come again, even if it doesn't get him any gain." - Me just right now after reading ur comment.
            P.S. The One They Kept is pretty good, definitely looking forward to it if its being continued, W work chef, here's a medal: 🥇

            Last Edited Sat 20 Sep 2025 07:32AM UTC

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            1. Why2001 on Chapter 4 Sat 20 Sep 2025 11:52AM UTC

              Thanks man. I do need to continue it. Im just unable to find a good work life balance to find time to write. Its a mess.

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              1. Randomguy_Niceguy on Chapter 4 Sat 20 Sep 2025 02:54PM UTC

                If I were you, I would start by waking up early like 6am, indulge in things I enjoy until 9-10am, then start working from 10-12 am, short break for lunch and 30 minutes for myself (so like an hour or so break), continue working from 1-5:30pm, then the rest of the time for myself, sleep by 10-11pm, and repeat. However, if your employed this might not work out for you, this would work best for a student without a job.

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                1. Why2001 on Chapter 4 Sat 20 Sep 2025 03:02PM UTC

                  Yes this sorta fits for me but i am employed and work 10am to 7pm with a 2pm hour lunch. So I usually get home at 8 and stay up till 11. I work a physically and mentally laborious job so usually don't have the energy to write but im going to try and pick it up again.

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                  1. Randomguy_Niceguy on Chapter 4 Mon 22 Sep 2025 01:54PM UTC

                    W man

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