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“Those…those are angels aren’t they. She heard me, my goddess actually heard me and sent help from the heavens to save me from your foul wickedness,” Diana uttered with tearful eyes as she couldn’t help but clasp her hands in worship from the sight of the two holier-than-thou entities.
“They’re Valkyries actually. Sure, they may act all chivalrous and virtuous and shit, but don’t buy their act. They’re nothing but a bunch of preachy, snobby guard dogs with their heads so far up their own tight asses that…….Diana what the hell are you doing?” Fulgora ranted before stopping herself after seeing what Diana was doing beside her.
Plopped down onto her knees, the woman the Lilim had just corrupted into a Balrog was conscientiously praying to the descending celestials. Never in the hundreds of years since the Lilim has been around had she ever seen such a ridiculous scene unfold. Did this idiot not realize these Valkyries came here to eliminate her from their bitch of a goddess’s precious soil. Fulgora’s eye couldn’t help but twitch as she realized this stubborn hothead was going to be more trouble than she was worth.
“I’m praying for forgiveness and salivation. What else would I be doing,” Diana aggressively informed her corrupter before returning to chanting under her breath.
“Don’t….don’t fucking do that. They’re not here to help you, they’re here to get rid of us, one way or another. The only thing they’re going to give you is jack and shit, so get up and stop embarrassing yourself. You’re a fucking Balrog for crying out loud, at least try and act like one,” the rebellious Lilim murmured as she thought she was about to die from second hand embarrassment.
“Why should I? If there is anyone who can help fix what you did to me, it’s angels. Besides why should I believe you. You’re a lying demon trying to steal me away for some unknown, probably sinister purpose,” the praying Balrog whined at the Lilim looming over her.
“Ok, technically I am trying to steal you away, but it really is for your own good, dumbass, especially now that these self-righteous freaks have shown up. Those chicken winged divas aren’t going to fix you. They couldn’t even if they wanted too. Now stop being such a baby and get up,” Fulgora demanded as she grabbed Diana by one of her grandiose horns and lifted her up with surprising ease.
“Enough! It’s disgraceful enough a Lilim has dared set foot on our Lady’s most sacred land, but you were brazen enough to give birth to something as heinous as a Balrog within our territory. Did you truly think your presence here wouldn’t go unnoticed, unchallenged. I knew your ilk were prideful and vain creatures, but even I didn’t believe any of you were foolish enough to think you could get away with causing such mayhem in this kingdom. Just what is your game here, whorish offspring of Lilith,” the taller, more physically imposing of the two Valkyries addressed as she fluttered only a couple feet above them
Now that they were nice and choose, Diana could finally get a good look at the pair of celestial warriors. Both were adorned in nearly identical silver plate which were embellished with the same golden rimes and symbols, as well as processing matching winged helms that completely protected the top half of their faces while concealing their judgemental glares. The only difference between them appeared to be in their physique and the weapons they wielded, as the one who had just spoke held a great spear in her hands and appeared to be the more mature and heavily built of the two. The other one was only slightly shorter and slimmer but the massive bow she had firmly in her grasp indicated she was no less a threat. However, despite the sanctimonious splendor the two radiated, there was something they mentioned that caught the young Balrog’s attention.
“Who’s Lilith? Why does that name resonate with me so?” Diana uttered as it felt familiar despite the fact, she knew she never heard that name before.
“She’s my mom, didn’t you hear the blowhard. You know, the Queen of Succubi, the Mistress of Lust, the current Mamono Lord, does any of that ring a bell?” Fulgora lectured as if this was basic information.
Diana’s face went pale upon that reveal as her voiced began to stutter, “Wait, wait, wait, that would mean you’re…you’re…”
“Yes, a daughter of the Mamono Lord. That’s what a Lilim is, dummy. Wait, did I not mention that to you before? If so, I guess that is also my bad,” Fulgora thought to herself aloud wondering if she had actually forgotten to inform Diana of that important bit of information regarding herself.
“I….I…I….drank…..kissed…..with…..daughter….Monster….Lord…..” Diana madly stuttered out as she went pale in the face trying to wrap her brain around the true extent of her newly acquired sins.
“Oh, snap out of it. It’s not that big a deal,” the rebellious Lilim uttered before getting a good look at her fiery companion and seeing she was on the verge of fainting, “Oh, wow you’re taking this news harder than I thought. Jeez, it isn’t that mind blowing, is it?”
“Don’t ignore the question you harbinger of degeneracy. What was your business here? What were you after? Tell us and we may show some leniency,” the spear wielding Valkyrie demanded with a growing scowl upon her face.
“Leniency? Oh, that’s rich. Let’s see, considering you pigs wouldn’t believe me if I told you, let me just say instead that I decided to invade your little wall-offed utopia by myself because I wanted to reck what little tranquility was here, corrupt every single soul for the hell of it, and force your precious little Chief God lick my clit. I even made this hot piece of ass to help me do it, too. How does that sound for an answer,” Fulgora smugly answered as she made an inappropriate motion with her tongue and fingers.
“That’s why you came here? I knew it! I knew you were evil!” Diana shrieked as she came back to her senses upon hearing the provoking proclamation.
“What! No, of course not. I was just messing with these pious birdbrains. How was that not obvious?” the Lilim reassured despite being dumbstruck by her new Balrog’s lack of social awareness.
“Oh…well….you shouldn’t be lying to angels than,” the devote fire demon retorted as she maintained her moral superiority.
“No more games, Lilim, whatever your scheme was, it ends now. Return to whatever dark hole you crawled out from but surrender that Balrog you created. Your blatant blasphemy against these lands can not be allowed to walk free,” the bow wielding Valkyrie proclaimed as she readied her weapon as a glimmering arrow of pure light formed in her hands.
“Oh, please, the only reason you mid-tier grunts want to let me go is because you know you can’t hope to face something like me. Is that why there’s only two of you, because your boss is worried I would taint too many of her lackey’s pretty little wings black tonight. If so, why exactly should I consider this insulting offer for even a second,” Fulgor inquired in a tainting manner.
“There are only two of us, because only two are required. We know the creation of something like a Balrog uses up an absurd amount of power, even for a Lilim such as yourself. While we don’t stand a chance against you even in your weakened state, we can dispose of this evil you gave birth to here tonight. We will not allow that insult to our Lady’s honor, this Cedar’s Bane you created to remain,” the larger of the two angels declared as she pointed her spear as if ready to strike.
“Holy shit, I keep forgetting how crazy loyal you girls can be. You hear that Diana, they already christened you with a title, isn’t that hilarious. Not going to lie, Cedar’s Bane isn’t bad. In fact, you could really rock with a name like that,” Fulgora amusingly uttered to her now cowering friend.
“Wait, wait, wait. May I please be allowed to speak, oh holy ones. I did not desire this, I am but a helpless victim of this…..this…fiend beside me. I am not this Cedar’s Bane you have dubbed me as. My name is Diana Cinis, a child of this land and of the benevolent Chief God who watches over it. I’ll surrender myself, so if you could…..not kill me….and save me…instead…that…would be…..great?” Diana exclaimed passionately at first, however her confidence dwindled as she felt the unseen, critical eyes of the two Valkyries bore into her burning skull as she spoke.
The divine archer looked to her taller sister-in-arms with a clear look of confliction, “Sister Theliel, is it just me or does this Balrog speak oddly respectfully. You don’t think she’s…”
“It doesn’t matter. She’s already lost and even if the corruption hasn’t by some miracle affected her mind just yet, doesn’t mean it won’t. It’s only a matter of time before she succumbs to it. I’m afraid her soul is already beyond trying to save,” the Valkyrie known as Theliel declared coldly.
“No, no I’m not. It was by my prays that you were brought here, right, so that must count for something. Please, I beseech you, remove what this demoness did to me, I know you can do it, you’re angels for crying out loud,” Diana desperately argued as she still couldn’t believe this was happening.
“Considering her willingness to surrender, perhaps elimination may not be necessary with this one, Sister……” the winged bowwoman put forth.
Diana nodded her head frantically as she overheard this, “Yes, yes. I knew you would see reason. I’m not a threat, I’m just…..”
“……Maybe we can simply seal her away for all eternity, instead?” the Valkyrie continued her line of thought.
“Wait, no, no, no. That isn’t necessary either. Can’t we talk about this!” the Balrog nervously begged as her flames around her hourglass figure started to increase once more due to her rising stress.
However, before the Balrog could continue to plead her case, her eyes widened in horror as she watched the angelic spearwoman pull her arm back before launching her divine weapon right at her. Diana froze in place as time seemed to slow as she witnessed the tip of that spear get closer and closer to her, until a sudden tug on the back of her hair caused her to take a few steps back and avoid incoming polearm all together. The spear embedded itself deep into the dirt, right between the Balrog’s dark furred legs as Diana was left to think of the dark outcome that could have occurred if she had remained where she stood. However, before she could truly allow her near death to sink in, she suddenly felt Fulgora’s hands on her slim waist, before she was hoisted into the air and flung over the Lilim’s shoulder like some trophy. Diana was taken aback by this sudden bold move before she felt Fulgora give her ass a playfully slap which caused her hefty cheeks to wobble slightly from the impact, while also snapping the Balrog back to her senses.
“It seems negotiations have fallen through, go figure. Come on, lets get your sexy ass out of here,” Fulgora casually declared as she made a dark portal appear with her fee hand.
“Don’t you dare! You corrupted me, ruined my purity! I’m not going anywhere with you!” Diana pitifully whined as she started to bang on her captor’s back like some desperate damsel in distress.
“Relax will ya. I’m trying to save you here. So, please do something about your temperature already, you’re fucking blazing right now. At this rate you’re going to burn my favourite jacket,” Fulgora groaned as even she had to admit the heat coming off of Diana was starting to get off-putting.
The punkish Lilim casually approached the growing mass of swirling darkness in the hopes of leaving both these overbearing celestials and this overly traditional village behind, in the hopes the Valkyries would be smart enough as to not try and stop her exit. However, before she could step through to finally escape, an arrow of pure light was fired through it, completely disrupting the quickly conjured portal and dispelling it entirely. Fulgora looked back with a glare at the archer who dared destroy her exit, although she seemed more annoyed than anything else.
“Fucking really? You, dummies really on intent on doing this the hard way, aren’t ya” Fulgora acknowledged with a sigh.
“Did you really think we would allow you to simply walk away. Your arrogance truly knows no bounds,” Theliel roared as she divebombed down to meet he Lilim on the ground and retrieve her spear.
In one fluid motion, the well-trained Valkyrie removed her weapon of choice from the cold earth and proceeded to instantly move into a daring lunge against the powerful fiend. Despite carrying Diana like a sack of useless potatoes, Fulgora was easily able to sidestep the desperate thrust as she glided backwards as if she were skating on ice. Again, Fulgora attempted to create an escape portal only to have it vanquished by the divine archer up above. While Fulgora never prided herself on being a fighter, even she could see through this duo’s strategy. At first Fulgora was confused as to why the archer wasn’t firing at her more aggressively but she quickly realized the celestial simply didn’t wish to accidently strike any of the unconscious humans lying about with a stray shot, which even the Lilim had to acknowledge was admirable. It appeared she had resigned her job to simply being the removal of any escape routes Fulgora created while her more frontline comrade kept up the pressure on the ground. As long as she held onto Diana, the Lilim knew she couldn’t simply fly out of here, so it was obvious the Valkyries were trying to force her hand to abandon her fiery luggage so they could separate them and focus their attention on the Balrog. It was a simple but good plan, but Fulgora wasn’t going to play into their hands, she was too stubborn to do something like that.
“We got to increase the pressure! We can’t let them escape!” Theliel howled as she continued her relentless assault despite her growing frustrations of not being able to hit either target.
“I know, but what of the humans, Sister? There’s too many of them about for me to fire recklessly,” the nameless celestial bowwoman responded as she shot away another portal.
“We got to take the chance. Another opportunity to rid the world of one of the Whore Queen’s wretched offspring may never come about again!” the golden winged spearwoman rebuked as she got a little wilder with her attacks.
“Ok, I don’t know about you, but I think this has gone on long enough,” Fulgora declared dispassionately as a rush of mana surged through her free hand.
With a barrage of snaps from her fingers, portal after portal began to appear one after another, as dozens of swirling masses of darkness now littered the landscape. The Valkyrie high above wasted no time trying to shoot away as many of them as she could but there were simply too many for one bowwoman to handle by herself. It took a few tries, but Fulgora was finally able to reach one of her conjured exits before it could be dispelled by the archer’s barrage of radiant arrows. Theliel witnessing her targets about to slip away between heir fingers, made one desperate lunge to piece the heart of the fleeing Lilim while her back was turned but Fulgora appeared to have anticipated this.
With a wicked grin, just before she dived into her dark portal, Fulgura gave a quick glance back and prepared to fire a bolt of corruptive red electricity from her fingertips at the spear wielding Valkyrie. Behind the veil of her helmet, Theliel’s eyes widened in terror as she knew she was moments away from joining her fallen sisters, but instead the blast of mamono rich lightning flew right past her face and somehow missed her completely. It took the Valkyrie a moment to understood how the Lilim had missed her from such a close range, but that’s when she saw it. The Balrog’s tail had wrapped around the Lilim’s wrist and changed the direction of the spell just in time so that the strike would just barely miss its mark. As the two fiends disappeared into the portal, never to be seen again, Theliel was left dumbstruck by the fact that a Balrog of all things had just saved her from corruption.
“Sister Theliel, are you alright!” the archer concernedly inquired as she flew down to check in with her compatriot.
“I’m….I’m fine, Sister Hael. But they got away,” the melee focused celestial uttered in a disappointed tone as she still struggled to come with terms over what just occurred.
“I know. I’m sorry for not being quick enough to cut off their escape but that Balrog, did my eyes deceive me or did she prevent that Lilim from striking you down before they escaped?” the Valkyrie known as Hael expressed her confusion over the scene she just witnessed play out.
“I’m not sure, but it certainly did appear that way. Regardless, they’re both gone now, far from our sight and jurisdiction. Not to mention we failed to uphold our Lady’s honor and missed our best opportunity to dispose of one of those despicable Lilims,” Theliel reluctantly admitted as she couldn’t help but blame herself for their shortcomings.
“We did all we could, Sister. But I think we should report what we just witnessed here tonight. I believe there is more to that Balrog than meets the eye. Perhaps her claims of maintaining her soul were true, perhaps she even holds the key to rescuing our fallen sisters,” Hael proposed with a glimpse of hope in her tone.
“Don’t say that. Don’t give me false hope. Our Sisters can’t be saved from the corruption that ravages them, whether its from that accursed Mamono Lord or that irredeemable Fallen God. However, I agree we must report our findings and if possible, find this Balrog, this Cedar’s Bane, to confirm any suspicions about her unique condition,” Theliel sorrowfully uttered.
“And what of the humans. We can’t leave them like this. What if the Lilim infected some or all of them with her corruption,” Hael put forth concernedly.
“It appears she only enchanted them to sleep, but we’re not leaving until everyone here is checked and their wellbeing is confirmed. Come, the morning shall arrive shortly and there is much to do,” Theliel ordered as she turned to inspect the closest human near her.
Despite their recent loss, the Valkyries wasted no time attending to their holy duties as they checked the spirit of each and every unconscious human affected by Fulgora’s sleep spell. Thankfully, by the grace of the Chief God, at most only the faintest trace of corruption could be found on any of them, no doubt residue left over from the enchantment. However it was nothing that wouldn’t naturally dispense from their bodies after an hour or so. While they could have awakened them themselves, both angels knew they would all wake up on their own in a few hours and they didn’t wish to disturb the peace here anymore than it already has by having their presence discovered. However, as they attended their humble work, the cry of a child off in the distance caught both their attention.
With shift haste the two Valkyries flew towards the sound of the disturbance until they came across the smoldering remains of a partially burned down home. Just like the town centre, there were a group of humans shattered about on the ground also unconscious. It didn’t take them long for the two celestials to piece together that this was the origin spot where the Balrog was first created. As they peered down, they spotted the source of the distress as they witnessed a small elven year-old girl trying desperately to wake up someone who appeared to be their mother as tears rolled down her face. However, both Valkyries were more stunned by the fact a child of all things, was even found to be awake unlike every other human in this village.
“It is all right child; your mother is safe and sound. She will wake up shortly, you need only be patient,” Hael softly uttered as she glided down to counsel the little girl.
“But I…I need her…to wake up….now. My sister…I need mom’s help to find…her. She’s missing….she was fighting off….a monster and now…she’s missing. Where….where is she? Where is my sister?” the eleven year old tearfully cried out as she didn’t even bother to look up to see the entitles that were now addressing her.
“Grant us your name, young one. Tell us, what happened here?” Theliel more sternly inquired, although even she felt sympathy for the child before her.
“Milani. My…my name is…is Milani. I….I heard my big sister cry out but…..but when I went to her room there was fire….everywhere and…and there was a monster on her bed. She…she stayed behind to….to fight it off, but…but I can’t find her now,” Milani whined as she finally peered up to get a good look at the two angelic figures around her, “Who….who are you people?”
“We are humble servants of the Chief God, so please continue with your story little one. What happened after that?” Hael gently requested the young girl to continue.
“The monster…got out….but….but than a strange lady walked out of our barn and…..and everyone flew asleep, even….even me. I woke up first…but….but no one else has yet. Why….why won’t they wake up?” the young girl continued to cry out.
“I’m afraid they have been put under a spell by a foul fiend, but thankfully it will not last long. However, we must know, how exactly were you able to wake up so early?” Theliel interrogated despite doing her best to come off as gentle as possible.
“I don’t know…I….I just did. Please, if you’re helpers of the Chief God lady….find my sister….find Diana!” Miliani weeped as she leaned over her slumbering mother.
Hael turned to her sister-in-arms to talk with her privately, “Sister, I believe that was the Balrog’s former name, that means she was this poor girl’s sibling. What should we tell her?”
“We tell her the truth. That her sister is gone and that only a monster remains,” Theliel advised coldly.
“But Sister, she is only a child. This news could scar her for life,” Hael expressed her concerns over the child’s wellbeing.
“Concealing the truth of her sister’s fate won’t bring her back to her. It’s best she finds out now before she thinks she can save her or some other foolish belief. I know its cruel to inform someone so young such a harsh truth but it’s necessarily for her to move on,” Theliel lectured her less experienced battle sister.
“I see your point but can’t we…can’t we just leave out the part where her sister became something as forsaken as a Balrog, at least until she’s older. For her sake,” Hael requested humbly.
“And what if her sister returns for her, for the rest of their family? How do you expect her to resist the temptation of being reunited with her sibling when she doesn’t understand the evil she has become. You would only be putting her at greater risk of being taken away and corrupted herself,” the older celestial warned with a more stern tone.
“But there is still hope in that Balrog. We saw it when she saved you from corruption,” Hael reminded her companion of the mercy that fiery beast showed her earlier tonight.
“There is hope in her for now but who knows how long that may last. One day, maybe one day soon, she may fully lose herself and return to reclaim what she lost, and what than. How can this child know to run from her own kin if she doesn’t understand what she is now,” Theliel argued back.
“Then I shall look after her. I shall become her mentor to prepare her when she gets older, and her shield if her sister ever returns when she is still young,” Hael declared with full resolve.
“Out of the question. A Valkyrie can not assign herself to any random person, not without the Chief God’s consent, no matter how desperately they may need our aid,” Theliel exclaimed with a disappointed groan.
“But she isn’t some random person. Can’t you feel it, there is something special about this little one. She was able to shake off a spell cast by a Lilim quicker than anyone here. While the enchantment was a very weak one, the fact she even managed it despite being so young is a testament to her potential. She may even share whatever trait which allowed her sister to retain her dignity after being corrupted. If there is anyone here deserving of our Lady’s blessing, it’s her,” Hael rebuked passionately, emboldened by this discovery.
A deep, diffident sigh escaped the veteran’s lips, “I suppose we can bring up the potential this girl holds when we issue our report. If the Chief God deems that girl worthy, then I will recommend you as her mentor, but no matter what she says, or what she decides, remember her word is law and you must accept any decision she makes. Of course, we can’t ignore the fact, this girl herself may even reject the idea, so that’s something you’re also going to have to accept if that happens. That being said, are you sure you want this duty, it is a high responsibility and you know the high risks of taking such a path. There is a good possibility you both may end up corrupted by the end of whatever journey you both take and I…I don’t wish to lose another Sister.”
“I understand the risks and dangers of taking such a course of action, but this is the only way change can happen. This is the only way we can discover how to fix what has been taken from us. There can be no glory or salvation without risk, Sister, were you not the one who taught me that,” the younger Valkyrie reminded her sister-in-arms.
“I remember but I just want you to understand what you’re getting into. But let us discuss this in more detail when we return back to our home plane, Sister. We must finish our work here first, and swiftly too before the other humans awaken, and learn of our presence here,” Theliel more softly replied as she turned with her sister-in arms to inspect the remaining humans and to further counsel the now sisterless girl.
From one world of darkness to another, Diana was pulled away from her home to some unknown location by her Lilim kidnapper, before being dropped unceremoniously onto a bed of sand. Diana immediately spat out bits of glass after some of the sand got into her mouth and was superheated into tiny shards. Ignored, yet curious, the newly born Balrog got up and dusted herself off before she turned to scan her new surroundings.
It was night here as well, but it seemed darker thanks to numerous thunderclouds that blocked the sky overhead. Only the oddly red light of the moon and the occasional bolt coursing through the clouds above proved any illumination here, despite Diana’s eyes having already become adjusted to seeing in the dark. The sound of wave after wave crashing onto the sandy shore she now found herself on was the main source of noise aside from whenever a crackle of thunder decided to bang out from overhead. Yet despite the clear sign of a storm above, oddly enough there was no sign of rain, at least none that the newly born Balrog could sense.
Despite having never been to one before, Diana was able to recognize her new environment as a beach thanks to her countless hours of reading, which meant that endless body of dark water before her was the ocean. She had always desperately desired to see the ocean, to taste its salty water and explore the wonders beneath its surface, but this was not how she imagined she would never end up here. In fact, she wasn’t even sure if she could survive in water anymore considering her new fiery nature.
Returning to her senses, Diana turned to her corrupter and now adductor only to witness her flinging off her jacket and revealing her sweat cover body as she tried to put out the flames ravaging her jacket by smothering it in the sand. The Lilim seemed to be awfully pissed her favourite jacket was now slightly burnt and even more so by the fact the flames were refusing to die out easily. However, Diana couldn’t bring herself to feel an ounce of pity for the Lilim’s dilemma, considering that fiend had just ripped her life away from her forever.
“What did I tell you about keeping your heat down, gods damn it. That shit was heat resistance too, how the hell did you manage to leave holes in it?” Fulgora complained as she inspected the damage left on her leather jacket after extinguishing the last ember.
“What do I care about your jacket. You kidnapped me. Take me back this instance!” Diana demanded as her heat increased even more, causing the sections of the sand around her to glassify.
“First of all, let me remind you what I just did, saved you. Those angels wanted your head, and they weren’t going to listen to you, no matter how much you begged. Secondary, you can’t go back, at least not as you are now. Learn some self-control first and than you can think about seeing your family again. How does that sound,” Fulgora declared as she put one of her fingers through one of her jacket’s newly aquired burn holes.
Diana’s flames and heat died down instantly, as that wasn’t the answer she was expecting. She didn’t think this fiend would ever let her see her family again but that answer actually gave her some hope. Perhaps, not everything was lost after all.
“Wait, I can see them again? Truly? This isn’t some trick, is it?’ the Balrog carefully inquired.
“Of course you can visit them, why wouldn’t you be? But considering you lack control of your new abilities, and they seem to be heavily affected by your emotional state, we need to get you under control first, otherwise you’re just going to end up burning the whole village down if you return as you are. Plus, it would be best if you learned some basic magic to help disguise yourself when you visit and have the means to teleport there and back. I promise to give you a free trip back there the first time, but after that you’re on your own,” the rebellious Lilim offered as she flung her partially burnt jacket over her now exposed shoulder.
“But I need to get back as soon as possible. I have to let my family know what happened to me, they need to know that I’m….ok?,” Diana uttered although her voice dipped when she considered if she was truly ok or not.
“Well, you’re going to have to wait a bit, because you got a lot to learn before you can even consider doing that. So, in the meantime, I’ll let you crash at my place for the time being and I’ll even let you borrow a few of my clothes, since I can’t have you running around here butt naked, can I. Consider this my apology of sorts. Now, come on, my beach house should be just around the bend,” Fulgora stated as she began to take her leave.
“Wait, now hold on a minute. At least tell me where you brought me. I deserve to know that much after everything you put me through,” Diana insisted with a scowl.
“Hmmm, oh right, I suppose that is important for you to know. We’re at my home away from home, the island of Saida. So I hope you’re ready to get your party on, because there is no better place to let loose than here.”
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