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1. Loran_Arameri on Chapter 1 Sun 30 Jun 2019 07:54PM UTC

   

   The shield gallery! Wow.
   I already love everything about this.

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2. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 1 Sun 30 Jun 2019 08:05PM UTC

      

      Thank you! I really wanted that wall of shields to be like an “oh fuck” type moment

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3. jellybeanforest on Chapter 1 Tue 06 Aug 2019 05:13AM UTC

   

   That last panel is... unsettling.

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4. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 1 Tue 06 Aug 2019 06:14AM UTC

      

      Good good haha. I made it the last panel of the first block because I really wanted it to hit hard, so thank you. Unsettling is perfect.

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5. Serinah on Chapter 1 Sat 23 Nov 2019 08:43PM UTC

   

   Oh, wow. This is wicked. ;)

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6. 1. Serinah on Chapter 1 Sat 23 Nov 2019 08:51PM UTC

      

      I should have looked at your stuff a bit more closely, I'd have written you a totally different story for HE... I tried so hard tho make the teacher/student thing palatable for an average reader. Seems that I shouldn't have.
      Oh well...

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   2. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 1 Sat 23 Nov 2019 08:54PM UTC

         

         I loved what you wrote! I really hope you don’t think I was disappointed, because I was the opposite. I was... appointed? I really enjoyed it.

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      2. 1. Serinah on Chapter 1 Sun 24 Nov 2019 07:47AM UTC

            

            Maybe I should reread. Might have a different perspective on it now.
            I was disappointed in some parts of this story, so I might have projected. But I'm really glad you liked it. :)
            TY <3

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         2. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 1 Sun 24 Nov 2019 07:23PM UTC

               

               Also it just occurred to me that you could not have read this comic before SLS, because this is what I did for SLS

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            2. 1. Serinah on Chapter 1 Sun 24 Nov 2019 09:33PM UTC

                  

                  :) Well, I know now that you like really dark stuff too. I didn't then.

                  Anyway, you do awesomely creepy stuff!
                  Kudos :)

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               2. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 1 Sun 24 Nov 2019 10:33PM UTC

                     

                     Thank you! I love me some creeps!

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7. Read_Like_Youre_Running_Out_of_Time (Jantique) on Chapter 1 Tue 25 Feb 2020 06:40AM UTC

   

   The first chapter is GREAT! Yeah, right from the word "usually", you know that this is not Evil!Tony's first rodeo (or Cap kidnapping)! And the art is awesome!

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8. resurrectedhippo on Chapter 1 Tue 06 Oct 2020 06:39AM UTC

   

   How many times have I read this? I love coming back to this comic. Thank you for this.

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9. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 1 Thu 08 Oct 2020 06:50PM UTC

      

      Bless!

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10. jellybeanforest on Chapter 2 Tue 06 Aug 2019 05:18AM UTC

    

    I love the series of darkening panels where Steve realizes that Tony took over his reality solely to get his hands on him right after Tony denies it (but in a tone I imagine means he totally did it for that reason alone) as well as the fragmented ones where Steve is left alone in anticipation of what is about to happen. Overall, I really love your use of color to show different moods.

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11. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 2 Tue 06 Aug 2019 06:16AM UTC

       

       Thanks!

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12. Read_Like_Youre_Running_Out_of_Time (Jantique) on Chapter 2 Tue 25 Feb 2020 06:44AM UTC

    

    But why does Tony's bathrobe have an R on it? Did he steal it from the Ritz?!

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13. 1. Obani on Chapter 2 Tue 25 Feb 2020 10:04AM UTC

       

       He's known many Steve Rogerses, and hasn't had to kidnap every one

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14. jellybeanforest on Chapter 3 Tue 06 Aug 2019 05:21AM UTC

    

    This page is very effective. The dark, the praying, the bruises, concentrating solely on Steve's reactions. It's sparse and very emotional.

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15. Horny bastard (Guest) on Chapter 3 Sun 15 Dec 2019 03:40AM UTC

    Damn Tony's dick is long as hell

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16. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 3 Sun 15 Dec 2019 04:17AM UTC

       

       It looks long bc hair covers where it attaches to his body

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17. jellybeanforest on Chapter 4 Tue 06 Aug 2019 05:25AM UTC

    

    I do really like Tony's character design in this. He's just so demented in a weirdly childish way. Steve's expressions are also amazing. I was just wondering... how many Steves does he have, and how come he dismembers so many of them? Is it because they are not what he's looking for (which apparently this Steve is) and that pisses him off enough to want to break his toys (because there's always more where they came from in the multiverse)?

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18. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 4 Tue 06 Aug 2019 06:21AM UTC

       

       I think it’s 37 Steves (or rather, 36 Steves and a Stella). Definitely part of why Tony hurts them is to vent his frustration that they aren’t quite what he’s looking for, and part of it is just that this version of Tony really likes hurting people...

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    2. 1. jellybeanforest on Chapter 4 Tue 06 Aug 2019 06:45AM UTC

          

          Is that how Tony's original Steve got a Glasgow grin? If so, what did Steve do to him in return (or was that Steve a masochist or something)?

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       2. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 4 Tue 06 Aug 2019 07:07AM UTC

             

             No, Tony didn’t like to hurt HIS Steve outside of some consensual spanking...uh, they would usually hurt people together, as a couple.
             Steve got messed up by Rebirth in this verse, and that’s why his face is like that.

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19. jellybeanforest on Chapter 4 Tue 06 Aug 2019 07:50PM UTC

    

    I just noticed in the photographs that dismembered Steve has... is that an arc reactor? Is he married to a female Tony Stark?

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20. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 4 Wed 07 Aug 2019 12:52AM UTC

       

       Yes, he's based on the Steve from earth-3490

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21. Read_Like_Youre_Running_Out_of_Time (Jantique) on Chapter 4 Tue 25 Feb 2020 06:49AM UTC

    

    OMG! 😢

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22. willidothefandango (nagth) on Chapter 5 Sun 30 Jun 2019 08:02PM UTC

    

    This is gorgeous and heartbreaking! Tony's face at seeing this other version of himself ugh. And all the Steve's anguish anf pain killed me.
    The panel of the shield room was specially great to me, just that one shot of all the shields to make Steve realise what a desperate situation he is in. Ouch ouch.
    I love the design of conqueror Tony, and really all of it! How you showed his powers and the use of colour. And oh oh Tony's halo and that hole on his chest gives him such an eerie look. Like a beautiful nightmare.
    This whole thing reminds me a bit of Moebius's style.

    This is definitely the hard thing to swallow kind of content, but so gorgeously done that you can't look away. Loved it.

    Thanks for all your work and for sharing your art!

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23. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 5 Sun 30 Jun 2019 08:24PM UTC

       

       Thank you! I think “beautiful nightmare” really captures the kind of aesthetic I was going for, so I’m glad to see I made it work.
       Hard to swallow is very good. I def want it to be upsetting lmao.

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24. Loran_Arameri on Chapter 5 Sun 30 Jun 2019 08:07PM UTC

    

    Wow. That was perfect XD
    I love how much we get to see of this world, how twisted this version of Tony is.
    And for what other reason would Tony become an interdimensional war lord?

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25. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 5 Sun 30 Jun 2019 08:30PM UTC

       

       This universe’s Tony and Steve weren’t exactly nice people before, but losing Steve is what motivated Tony to start spreading his evil around the multiverse for sure.

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26. Kiyaar on Chapter 5 Sun 30 Jun 2019 10:34PM UTC

    

    this is hi-key my favorite kind of content, thank you

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27. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 5 Sun 30 Jun 2019 10:35PM UTC

       

       Big same

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    2. 1. Kiyaar on Chapter 5 Mon 01 Jul 2019 05:37PM UTC

          

          oh my god. back to say: is tony eating that one steve's arm? MISSED THAT THE FIRST THREE TIMES

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       2. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 5 Mon 01 Jul 2019 06:02PM UTC

             

             😏

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28. RC_Steel on Chapter 5 Mon 01 Jul 2019 03:45AM UTC

    

    Wow! All those poor Steves. And I feel bad for Tony too. He is obviously very sick. I love your art style!

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29. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 5 Tue 02 Jul 2019 06:55AM UTC

       

       Don’t feel too bad for Tony... he might have created his own hell here

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30. farawatt on Chapter 5 Mon 01 Jul 2019 03:57AM UTC

    

    You made it hurt on purpose.

    I really, really, love this.

    My God, all the Steves. Steve’s prayer. The tears on his face. The background story in this reality. Tony, eating lollipops after raping Steve.

    The scenarios are magnificent and horrible.

    One of the things I like most is Steve losing "hope", and here, all the broken Steves ... and then, for a moment, "You loved him." Tony is so sick, so sad and fucked up, that he would do all this terrible shit.

    The final scene is wonderful. Disturbing. I don’t know who the fuck you are but I love you. It's more than I wanted and it's perfect.

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31. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 5 Tue 02 Jul 2019 06:58AM UTC

       

       My guy if you like to see Tony Stark raping Steve Rogers LEMME TELL YOU that’s What I Do and I’m happy to do it

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32. bardingbeedle on Chapter 5 Tue 02 Jul 2019 04:03PM UTC

    

    i love you. like. i am holding back bc creator reveals aren't out yet but you are literally in my heart at all times and i love you i love you i love you oh my god this. is toptier. i read it 5 times today because holy shit. you are amazing. i have ten thousand questions. i would read this every day of my life

    the shield room? the other steves? the way tony's halo and "arc reactor" changes color? his rings? his HAIR? the LAST PANEL? fuck.

    the dialogue is perfect. the art is amazing and expressive and vivid and TERRIFYINGLY GORGEOUS, plus the writing? the lines? the pacing? perfect.

    thank you, oh my god

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33. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 5 Tue 02 Jul 2019 07:44PM UTC

       

       Haha yes, you must maintain my VERY SECRET ANONYMITY.
       thank you so much for your very nice comment :)

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    2. 1. bardingbeedle on Chapter 5 Wed 03 Jul 2019 05:52AM UTC

          

          I TRULY AM WONDERING WHO THE ARTIST OF THIS MIGHT BE....A PUZZLE ! bfmsbfmsbf

          hearts for u

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34. LionLena on Chapter 5 Sat 20 Jul 2019 04:00PM UTC

    

    I have only one problem ...
    Why is it the end ... It was frightening and fascinating at the same time.

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35. jellybeanforest on Chapter 5 Tue 06 Aug 2019 05:30AM UTC

    

    You are just so good at facial expressions (for both Steve and Tony). Did Tony give Steve a glasgow smile to match his Steve? What happened to his Steve that he can't fix with the Infinity Stones? Overall, a very interesting idea and well-executed. I absolutely loved this :) even though it's super dark.

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36. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 5 Tue 06 Aug 2019 06:30AM UTC

       

       Thank you :) Tony absolutely did give Steve a Glasgow grin, bringing him just a bit closer to being “perfect” (aka, more like the Steve in the jar)
       I don’t want to come right out and say how jar-Steve died, but it’s permanent.

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    2. 1. jellybeanforest on Chapter 5 Tue 06 Aug 2019 06:43AM UTC

          

          ...Was it to get the soul stone?

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       2. 1. One and Five Nines (Obani) on Chapter 5 Tue 06 Aug 2019 07:08AM UTC

             

             That would be crazy

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          2. 1. jellybeanforest on Chapter 5 Tue 06 Aug 2019 07:21AM UTC

                

                Ooooo... I gotcha :)

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