starting with the contract talk already kitty when I catch you
I love how you write Time Mommy ahhhh so good I'm in love, Venti deserves a step mom
Love how you are writing creep Decarabian and the others dismissing Venti's concerns even though ik it will hurt later it is so gooooood ahhh
I love how you described the garden it's like I'm there... although if I was I would be stealing Venti and the way you write Decarabian's dialogue it's so good
BITE MORE THAN HIS NOSE VENTI BITE HIS DICK OFF
“Coward,” he spat. “You think that was enough to make me fear you? I could snap you in two if I so desired.”
Wind whipped around them, dark stormy gales overpowering gentle breezes. Venti didn’t know how to answer, or even if he should, so he kept his mouth clamped shut.
“See?” Decarabian squeezed just a little tighter, smirking while Venti clawed at his wrists. “You fear me, and because of that, I can do whatever I want to you. Little wind wisp, you have been very rude to me ever since you arrived. Hiding under your mother’s skirts, having her answer for you, throwing away every single gift I so carefully picked out. You know, I just wanted to make you feel welcome.”-- KITTY THIS IS SO GOOD I'M ASLDJASLKDJSALDK SHAKINGGG ARGHHH
“-GONE FOR AN HOUR TO FIND MY SON MISSING AND YOU AS WELL! HOW DARE YOU, HOW DARE YOU LAY A HAND ON HIM!”
He was vaguely aware of clawed hands gently helping him out of the water. Despite his vision going in and out, he could make out the vaguely blurred outline of his mother. Her wings, all sets having folded out of her back, were flared. Claws had burst from her hands, a multitude of eyes splitting open all over her body. The storm winds swirled at her command, with her as the eye.---- YESSS OMG TIME MOMMY IN ALL HER GLORY I AM BARKING AHHHH GET HIS ASS
eyyy orobashi to the rescue for nowwww and I forgot but I love how you write dissaciation its so captivating
i love the bond with venti and ishtarothhhh yesss mama's boy ftw ahhhh
Focalorsssss ahhhh
Me and my fellow succubi are all well aware of wing etiquette and touching like that is enough reason to drag a perpetrator to court due to Monsieur Leviathan’s laws.”--- I LOVE THIS WORLD BUILDING LORE AHHH NEUVI WOULD BREAK WHOEVER TOUCHED RINA'S WINGIES PROBABLY AHH OMG
Love how you are doing the court proceedings and Mavuika and Andrius caring about him ahh
“That’s when the guest bit him and ran off,” the other half supplied. “We are unsure what happened deeper in the garden, but Decarabian was remarking how he would kill the guest, consequences be damned.”
The little remaining colour in Decarabian’s face drained. Venti felt as if his heart stopped.
Buer relaxed back onto her throne. “That is all,” she said. “You witnesses are free to go. Thank you for your time.”
As the other demons shuffled back out the door, the breath caught in Venti’s throat. He wasn’t entirely sure of what to make of the situation. It kinda felt like all of the Archdemons had ganged up on Decarabian… like it was planned. Perhaps a moment of opportunity for a long lasting grudge? Spur of the moment scorn?
Something wasn’t right… Why had the witnesses taken his side?-- kitty,,, kittttyyyy I'm scared and squinting I'm about to shake you
BEHEAD HIM ANDRIUS BEFORE IT IS TOO LATE TEART THE BITCH APART
OKAY I CAN BREATH GOOD CHAPTER I NEED TO TAKE A LAP AHHH
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